Torture Tournament

The twist for that second round was a little too obvious...The premise for the story isn't bad, but the author doesn't seem to be all that good at using it. Looking them up, they seem to be a newbie, so hopefully they get some good criticism in order to improve.
 
Time to read it again from the beginning, to prepare for the new chapters :eek:
 
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It's the little eye with the \ through it
click it then type between the brackets.
 
the torture showed becomes tame and more tame here , i expect some hardcore gore creation scene undergoing in the chapter but the author choose to rise up the drama huh ...

well let's just wait and see
 
I thought this thing was gonna be full KINO EDGE, but its pretty tame, at least the subjects are interesting.
 

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