I mean except for the Japanese parts I don't think the translations are bad, the parts where you just write "kimochi" and stuff feels as cringe as listening to a Japanese voice actor butcher english. Other than that I don't think there are any problems with the scans, good job .
meme translation is way better than a normal translation please dont conform to society and boring ppl UR A SNOWFLAKE YOU NEED TO NOT LET OTHER PEOPLE TELL YOU WHAT TO DO except this one