Valhalla Penis Mansion - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Welcumming Blowjob

I see thank you very much guys for the advice, the meme will stay as long as I get good reference, I'll also tone down the weebs language except yabai and sugoi and some useful ones, and I wouldn't use croot again to make it less cringey.,
 
Well yes I found that the translation is cringe and it's hard for me to read the translation. But, this manga is already a erotica one (I know due to Japanese "common sense" no genital means R15 while erotica is R18 but meh) with a rather dry comedy from time to time so I won't bother myself to even read the translation.
With also cringy storyline, your translation makes it perfect, in a positive way, with some meme here and there.
Overall, a very good work you have there. Should you tune down that forced Indonesian joke, I think it would be more bearable to read.
 
I actually enjoyed the translations. Cringy as it is, it was perfect for the comedy. I actually laughed way more from the translation and references like that arise from SL
 
This shitty meme translation is the only reason I'm reading this isekai crap.
Keep doing God's work.
 
Nooo just delete the weebs language but don't delete the croooot 😂 Can't us Indonesians enjoy our inside joke just once?
 

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