Watashi ga Motenai no wa Dou Kangaetemo Omaera ga Warui! - Since I'm a College Student, I'll Share a Room (Doujinshi) - Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[penmore]

I would actually like a continuation with these ideas.

 

[Ravezta]

Damn, someone managed to write a doujin with the original formula up to 100%

I like nemo's version. That's the most realistic one and kuro actually do something to earn money lol

 

[Oeconomist]

@Arashiyama—

“reccomend” → “recommend”

On page 16, “peak” is misused. Elsewhere, “peek” is properly used.

“peak” — n highest point; v to reach a highest point

“peek” — to look quickly and briefly or surreptitiously

On page 25: “more bravely” → “more bravery” (The word “bravely” is an adverb; the word “bravery” is an abstract noun.)

It would be good if whoever letters the translation played a bit with a perspective tool, to lay-down letters on receding surfaces in a way that is less jarring. (I don't know what is found in Photoshop, but the GIMP has a nice perspective tool.)

 

[Oeconomist]

The device of playing-out the hypotheticals as if more than just hypothetical was pretty well effected.

 

[Arashiyama]

@Oeconomist
Unfortunately, i have nothing to do with the scanlation. It was done by some random anon from /u/ .
Though i could fix the typo, i guess.

 

[Oeconomist]

@Arashiyama—

Okay. I didn't know what if any involvement you had beyond posting here, but I thought that you'd be the one person who might be in communication with the group.

I don't think that you should take-on the business of corrections, but of course it's your call.

 

[JohnJRenns]

and as always, YuriTomo is the only logical conclusion

 

[bubwa]

This was incredibly in character. Awesome