I haven't finished reading the chapter, but note to the translator: This is a high-quality manga. There's no way "the raws were pretty nonsensical" at any point. If there's a problem anywhere, it's with your understanding of Japanese. Don't blame the author and editors for that.
Edit: saw the note at the end that the source was "sketchy Chinese raws." Welp, Garbage in, Garbage Out.
Did Kaya not notice that said "beautiful person" looked at her with eyes of disgust/hatred? How much you wanna bet she'll try to steal him from the mc because she's a dumb thot.