We'll Go See the Ocean.

Ok, I didn't really get all of that 'cuz I'm not that deep, but it had a nice feel
 
I guess my mind became shallow after a few years without my language tests. I would've understood its implicit meaning before then.
 
I think it was a smidge longer than necessary - the subway part in particular seemed to just be hammering the point home.

But all in all, a great oneshot.
 
I like melancholy, but I don't much enjoy reading stories about miserable people.
 
Best thing I've read this week. Tasteful as always, Strange Lovely Dark.
 
...One of those cases where I'm not sure what tags should be added because it's not sufficiently clear what bits were real, imagined, or metaphorical. XD
 

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