Winner Takes All - Ch. 14 - Crossroads

Just read the 14 chapters available. It's incredible.... how dull and void this is. Not only are there more tropes by page than I care to count, but the rythm is so so so bad. 14 chapters for what? Almost nothing. We literally had a full chapter of a guy thinking about a combat beginning. That's like a few seconds. A full chapter. -_-"
 
@Chisako
Maybe it's because I read the chapters in one go, but it sure doesn't look like it from where I'm standing. Most of those chapters are plain useless (the test fight for clients could have been done in 4 cases for example) and don't give us any meaningful information.
 

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