You Were A Girl?!

The premise was interesting but it doesn't have enough plot to make a story. It was basically over after two meetings.
 
>"Ok, so, we should probably just go out, yeah?"

>They started going out.

I love a happy ending :D
 
Chapter 2 is really low effort in comparison with chapter 2. Looks like rough sketches and/or a deadline half an hour later?
 
What a pity, I was hoping for a story and there was not a bit of it.
It amazes me of the high rating that this manga has.
 
It amazes me of the high rating that this manga has.

It really shouldn't, yurifags don't have any measurable standards when it comes to quality of their beloved genre. As long as there's "fluff", "happy ending", "kissu" and "no males in sight", everything's a masterpiece. Things deviating from formula using those components will be met with opposition and varying degrees of bitching, no matter the story's execution*.

As for the comic itself, it's mundane and forgettable - easily could have appeared in Yuri Hime and wouldn't stand out in any way among the rest. Art is nice i guess, as far as level of pixiv doujins go.

*oh, some comments in "Purple Qualia" thread at some other place - in which specific part of your ass your head has to be located for you to actually complain about absence of "confession" in a series like that?
 
purple the qualia had terrible pacing and structure, and people are complaining about the lack of substance here too. you're just being petty
 
Short, sweet and to the point. Enjoyable quick little thing.

Unless you're a soulless, joyless fuck like some people here.
 
purple the qualia had terrible pacing and structure, and people are complaining about the lack of substance here too

1) Cool, but that's not what i was talking about. Unless by "substance" you mean "obnoxiously presented dull romance" - in that case, thank you for proving my point.

edit: and now i feel stupid, because "lack of substance" obviously referred to this thread's crap, not qualia ; still, that doesn't change the fact that you didn't address the point i was making.

2) Sides, that was just an example.

Unless you're a soulless, joyless fuck like some people here.

Hahaha. Better than being manic, deluded, fetishist creep i suppose.
 
Wait. That's it?! It's a little clumsy and not much story so far, but it has potential. Pity, it's only a two-shot.
 

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