Yumemiru Shounen Shoujo - Oneshot

[Criscore]

Lol. I had a lucid dream with the exact same premise as this one and it was pretty hard to develop the story. I wish the author could show me how it's done

 

[MasterPannya]

BRAVO NOLAN

 

[Hakin]

I don't really remember if i ever had any lucid dream experiences before

 

[hiddentheory]

@Hakin
Sleep paralysis really help with that.

 

[comeonnow0]

"Tell that to Konno too!" That line makes absolutely zero sense. Ayase apparently directs that TOWARDS Konno himself? Konno is the one who responds with "Sure", so it seems to be directed towards him.

Separately, not every dream has the dreamer as the point of view. Sometimes it's a dream of being a completely different person. I wonder how that would work for his power.

 

[mrbrown]

0-100

 

[Tertium777]

So sweet... oh and "Nice.gif"

 

[fgsfdss]

fund it

 

[havelmom]

Spoiler

serialize it

 

[Treethatsadog]

Honestly you could definitely get an easy 3 volumes outta something like this. Short plot that wraps itself up and fit into a magazine as an extra weekly or biweekly series.

 

[thirteen-nights]

@comeonnow0
I'm assuming the Japanese is 'Konno mo itteyo!'
which translates to 'Say it too Konno'
but depending on context and nuance, the meaning can change to how it was originally translated.

 

[CyanHide]

FUND THIS

 

[StLL]

imagine if he gets in dream of a serial killer and he was the victim. fuck

 

[Short_Circut]

@comeonnow0 yea it's more along what @thirteen-nights said in that it's more like "Tell him as well, Konnno". The original is "Konno kara mo itteoiteyo" which roughly translates to that I believe

 

[emibg]

@MasterPannya
Pretty sure M Night Shyamalan will get to make the movie.

 

[Dlroth]

Boy this plot has a lot of potential. But the randomness sets back the pacing. Unless there's a reason for him to enter only her dream, or just skip some dreams and just show her's most of the time. Or maybe show her dreams most of the time and create some arcs about other's?

(Please tell me if my grammar is wrong. I had to max out my brainpower to create this paragraph)

 

[Lolipop_Candy]

Nice concept, but if the power target too random, it might be a letdown. It should be "whoever he think"

 

[Carnage]

So... dey fucc? :V

 

[Tactless]

Maybe the dream he enters requires HIM to be dreamed about so that he gets to peek in.
He's Tanaka's baseball teammate and Ayase's target of affection; it's comforting to be seen by others in a good light.

 

[jadro]

CUTE. CUTECUTECUTECUTECUTECUTE