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[MangaDex]

 

[duylinh]

Giant creature with wings, sharp teeth and claws, eats vegetable.
Uh

 

[MrIncognito]

I genuinely cannot tell if the contents of the narration box and speech bubble on the first page have gotten mixed up

On the one hand, it sounds like she's narrating her own story out loud with someone standing right next to her, on the other hand, the narration box is really strangely worded as well.

 

[MyLove]

As you can see, we need a Proofreader xD Our English isn't the best If you are able to help, please send us a message to the e-mail or enter to the Discord server and send us a message <3
Thanks! Hope you liked the chapter~!

-Mitsu

 

[VX]

"Have you ever eaten breakfast?"

Try "Have you had breakfast yet?" Or " Have you eaten yet?"

IMO almost all text need to be rewritten

 

[trickshot121]

Mother of dragons

 

[nachtness]

bIue eyes queen dragon

 

[semicharmed]

Muh queen

 

[Kineblue]

Thank you for picking this pick! May I ask which novel/manhua Is that from for your credit page?

 

[digitalromance77]

A bit hard to read, but still readable so yeah i think its still fine nonetheless... Hope it will be better in the next ch.

 

[icarushector]

@duylinh like bears I guess. Omnivores are lovely.

 

[thebenefactor]

Thanks for picking this up!

 

[Wolfwhistler]

Lol "Have you ever eaten breakfast?"