Again My Life - Ch. 51

This chapter was pretty bad tbh. The great part about this story was seeing him use his brains. This was a very Gary Stu chapter.
 
He’s definitely going to scold him for acting recklessly and entering without backup, which to be fair, is pretty fucking stupid and it’s sad to see that from a normally smart and collected MC. He feels like a generic op Time Travel MC right now.
 
So he fucked up. Evidence was obtained illegally. He went into private property without any valid reason and attacked it's residents. That is just stupid.
 
Agreed with the other comments. There was no build up or any suggestion that he would be able to beat up so many people all at once. He's just becoming this wish-fulfillment character who can do anything.
 
bruh the ending was like an indian drama show, who cares about a mere slap after he took down an entire gang of thugs by himself and took a bat to the head?
 

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