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It's story book format. The mc is telling her life like it's a story she's reading to you. It gives off a distanced feeling. 
Very plot driven. To the point it might feel a bit like it's being tugged by the hair instead.
The art is good though, and although the pacing is fast I can still follow what's happening. The pages are wel put together, so it holds up well.
Not the best piece of writing, but certainly a fun en enjoyable story with cute art and a passionate MC. ESPECIALLY CUTE FASHION!!!!
				
			Very plot driven. To the point it might feel a bit like it's being tugged by the hair instead.
The art is good though, and although the pacing is fast I can still follow what's happening. The pages are wel put together, so it holds up well.
Not the best piece of writing, but certainly a fun en enjoyable story with cute art and a passionate MC. ESPECIALLY CUTE FASHION!!!!
 
						 
 
		
 
 
		 thanks Mr/Ms caterpillar
 thanks Mr/Ms caterpillar 
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