Garbage Brave: Isekai ni Shoukan Sare Suterareta Yuusha no Fukushuu Monogatari - Vol. 2 Ch. 9

If he had slap MC instead and got wounded on his palm, that's more believable
 
I believe MC will not leave Kana's behind in this town.
I think they will do well in the future because MC's involve in Kana;s circumstance.
Also, MC has no experience handling woman's heart before. If he finds himself learning about it, he will change his mind and go for a haream route...
 
I read the LN and I can say this: Watered down version of Arifureta with worse harem, why worse harem?

He's tame af until one day when he goes: "welp, ima make them all my brides! oh, and also bang them!"

That's basically all, he goes from 0 to 100 in one chapter, he gets 3 brides and 1 imouto in one chapter and in next ones he gets 2 more wives. I mean, yeah, they have prior "lore" but it's too little... and that makes the "romantic relationship" plot shallow af.

Btw, until this manga chapter 4 of his 5 future wives already made their appearance, guess who they are.
 
Scanlators: adding your commentary in the margins is one of the worst things you can do. For perspective it's like someone chatting away behind you while you're in a cinema watching a movie. If you really want people to read your insightful commentary, add it to the end on an extra page. Inserting it onto the page is distracting to the reader, and worse, disrespectful to the authors.
 
to add on @StevenK5613 's comment, i don't mind if the commentary is to explain stuff that non-japanese speakers might not understand (stuff like puns), but i think this level of side comment (only one note from redrawer) is still okay.
 
@Neltharn
3 are obvious, slave girl, wolf girl, and classmate girl. I'm gonna guess the 4th is either the greeter girl at the slave shop or the maid who has a far too detailed design and was actually given a name instead of just being background character #11. The maid will be something, though she could be the killer instead of one of the heroines.
 
Hahahahaha
The idiot noble trying to start shit in literally someone else's house, with a welcomed guest and person in the employ of the owner cut himself on the sweet sweet EDGE of the Protagonist, God-Kun
 
The fact that "commander" Rotten said he saw him fight with his own eyes "the assassins targeting Kana" is really weird.
Why would he be there?
 
@SilverSun Nah, I just felt cringe, imo it looks so out of place and will catch people's attention everywhere he goes , like "JUST LOOK AT ME" lol
 
Well this is an isekai so I'm not expecting much from the story, but if a manga is trying to get me invested by putting me through tragedy (as opposed to other isekais that are basically power trips), I'm only willing to susoend disbelief so far.

The family didnt believe her to be the murderer yet still sold her to slavery? Uh, if the father of the victim says its ok, they wouldnt need to enslave her right? Fiiiiine, maybe the family is pressured by other nobles to do so.

Then, why her horrible treatment in jail? Cant they just shove her in a separate prison under the guise of "extra security" while actually treating her decently? Fiiiiiine, maybe her bad condition is mostly caused by her own grief and self-deprecation. No matter how well you're treated, refusing to eat much for months will fuck you up.

I cant however think why the family would let the owner of your son's killer to stay in your mansion as guest. It shows to whoever's pressuring the family in the first place that the family doesnt hold much grudge for the slave girl.

I can only suspend my disbelief so far, especially if the author dont even acknowledge these emotional plot holes
 
stamina has nothing to do with defense.
and what mage thinks to throw a punch or even block an attack with their fist...
 
Wait he says that he has stamina S and level 300, but it shows up as stamina G on the status board???
 
So the chief magician was trying to buy the murderer of his employer's son? Thats sus as fuck.
Also, i guess they will be interrogating the people that lied about seeing her kill the kid, right?

@Snebster99 that was the status board of that retard, not the MC.
 

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