God of the City

[dharman]

*thumb up* please keep up your good work.

 

[Sareg]

So many lazy dimwits complaining about the translation. It's clearly not his native language, and yet he's taking time out of his life to try it.

thanks for the work, Tsikot. It's completely readable if you have proper reading comprehension.

 

[Tsikot]

@Sareg thanks bro.

 

[plague6924]

thanks!

does anybody know if there is a novel to this? i couldn't find it on novelupdates

 

[Snowfennec]

i would like to read more of this =w=

 

[spider101]

Did u stop working in it?????

 

[gilbertte45]

still waiting for next chapter.....

 

[dinkan]

guys how was my translation.
if their needs any changes plz comment it i will change it in the future projects :)

 

[The_Immortal_Master]

 

[Mufasa_was_h3r3]

I like it keep up the good work

 

[khan489]

another trash

 

[ryuuou]

English practice needed but it is readable..

 

[Gusye]

need moar

 

[Fayze]

Thank you for translating. Grammar can use some work but overall it is readable. Much appreciated.

 

[sleepymonkey]

@dinkan
just curious as to how your translating it? is it mtl or native just learning?

 

[Foreverhound]

Translation isn't perfect, but better than some I've seen. Have to wonder what this "Fairy" and "Too heavy" stuff means, though. Is it meant to be something like "Spirit" and "Too dense"?

 

[sleepymonkey]

@Foreverhound
fairy is probably immortal and too heavy would probably vary depending on context I think. If your talkin' bout chapter 10 I think it should say" this piece of immortal device/tool cut(passed? ....unsure) immortal(s), the shaqi(baleful/evil qi/aura) is extemely heavy."

 

[dinkan]

guys the latest chapter will not e that much prefect because,I have to go to a function so pllz forgive me if this chapter doesn't reach your demand

 

[dinkan]

guyz i am currently in need of some money if you could plz transfer
here is my paypal id dinkan8344@gmail.com

 

[dinkan]

guyz.I have now started a patreon account.If you guys could become a patrons it would be a lot for me.
patreon=dinkan666