His Majesty Discovered I'm a Woman! - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

Oh come on, I mean he didn't disguise himself and he used his real name.

I used to think that those superman-like stories where they changed clothes, hairstyle, and took of the glasses were too far fetched, but this one really takes the cake 😂
 
In the span of about a week or so the Mc has
[ol]1. Fallen in love
2. Gotten jealous
3. Broken off a relationship
4. Lost an important item from crush[/ol]
 
Why would she step out of the carriage, and how the hell did such a tiny hair clip catch her attention if she was angry?

Makes 0 sense...
 
man, it wouldn't be as jarring if like.... the date happened over the course of a few days (as in they steadily met each other and hung out), but the fact that they had one (1) date AND this noblewoman came up to cause trouble, the pacing in this chapter feels jarring. i think it would have been better to cut off the chapter before running into the carriage. not every single chapter needs to end on a ~cliffhanger~
 
We've only met for 20 minutes but I like you and I want to be with you 😘

Err... what?
 
Normally I think shoujo stuff takes too long to get to the point but this has massively over-corrected...
 
BUT WHAT IS THIS FEELING IN MY CHEST THAT I DON'T RECOGNIZE?

Oh can someone inform me of the meaning of this feeling?

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