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- May 27, 2020
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Yeah, the plot is absolutely full of holes, going from solid cheddar to swiss cheese in a single chapter.... but I still like the FL, and the interactions behind our three main characters are fun enough that I'm going to stick with this. I've shut my brain off for less. If the characters are enjoyable enough, it can make up for odd plot issues for me.


hopefully the story comes up with a more interesting reason as to why the general wanted to go back to the castle so much (and it wasn’t so that it could be revealed that he was the general >>)... Still, MC is fun and I really want to see how the romance develops between MC and ML.