page 2 animal eared girl is not underaged. page 10 red hair girl says will you accompany me to the adventurer's guild, not to gil. page 12 elf girl instead of saying she wants to drink it she's saying she won't be able to drink it. page 17 bald guy's last line: if you hadn't forgiven us we were resolved to taken a beating at the very least. page 18 bald guy's line is not gil-shaped potions but potions prepared by a member of the alchemist guild. page 19 mc's last line: I don't intend to treat you as slaves. page 20 mc's line about him not giving a  damn about status/being fed up with it and telling the girl she should stfu basically... really, our mc is a charmer