Isekai Monster Breeder - Vol. 2 Ch. 20

Wow he didn't glance at Carol's boobs even with open cleavage like that 🤣
 
@vvinchan - most of it seems to be ok for my crude eyes.

Only things that make me want to suggest changes are around page 9

This navel's waist -> This bare midriff (This bare belly)

Then the strip in this section -> And this absolute area OR And this open area OR And then these bare thighs. (It's the bare legs between the long socks and the skirt that's the common fetish)
 
I like his 2 girls! For some reasons for someone who gets stressed by girls in harem, rom com or shoujo so easily this has not been annoying to me!
 
@vvinchan As mentioned by Simpleton, the "Strip" is actually the amount of bare thigh shown between the skirt and stockings called "Absolute Territory" in English. We're not criticizing, just informing.

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ZettaiRyouiki
 
Oh that clueless author. Doesn't he know that girls don't poop and pee? They only need 1 pair of underwear.
 
The author has missed that there is a reason for the trope of Dwarves being blacksmiths and gnomes being tinkerers. A 13 year old female gnome shouldn't be able to lift a good blacksmith's hammer.
 

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