Thanks for picking this up, I've been waiting for ages for someone to do it. As far as the translation goes, your grammar is pretty good. I don't really know Japanese, so I can't say how precise the tl is, but it's not something that can't be understood. The only thing I personally have issue with is the format, i.e. the width of the chapter is smaller than the ones before, but it doesn't affect the reading that much so please do keep on doing this.