Madougushi Dahliya wa Utsumukanai ~Kyou Kara Jiyuu na Shokunin Life~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

@Siquall

well he was always meant to be an asswipe.
not sure if this is actually a spoiler, but i'm going to put it here just to be safe.
hopefully they don't leave out the explanation as to why he acted the way he did, the explanation makes him seem a little less shitty
none of them actually loved each other so while its kind of sad, its for the best in the long run that they broke up.
 
its hard to care about a character being a prick when the person they're being mean to just lets them
 
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The pacing seems a little strange. They talk in the morning about breaking the engagement off. She talks with her friends. She makes an appointment at the guild (before 2 o'clock). They go the notary for the annulment at 2 o'clock and after that they move her stuff out of the house. And he needed to take the loan of 50 gold.

And during that time (MC talking with her friends, making that appointment and getting back to move her stuff out) Tobias had sex with his lover and his lover's stuff got put in the wardrobe? Guy couldn't wait it seems.
 
The other one was much better done. a more cohesive plot and pace, less pulling stuff out of their asses
Just look up Dahliya
 
what a cheap man, you don't respect your future wife enough to give her something made FOR HER AND FOR HER ALONE
 
what the hell... this is the first time i'm seeing MCs in a romance isekai fantasy ACTUALLY PROCEEDING with annulling an engagement (despite the circumstances of the guy not being an actual ML) wow 😱 BRAVO!! but damn poor her 😩
 
I love that she has supportive friends and a community that cares for her. Too many romances have main characters that have no solid friend, family, or community connections, so the only person they process things with is their love interest. I really like that this is not the case here.
 

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