Maou ni Natta node, Dungeon Tsukutte Jingai Musume to Honobono suru - Vol. 2 Ch. 11

[JohnSmiththeAnon]

I'll miss your translations for this series, preferred them to LH's

 

[firosahoge]

@hikufalafel thanks but I dont read spoilers. Thanks for using tags.

 

[mahtan]

Yuki used "smooth talk", it is super effective.

 

[AngryFerret]

Ahhh I liked your translation better, still thanks for this chapter ^^

I really don't mind old English, just make it better. Missing letters and random intonation don't made it sounds old, but like somebody with big speech impediment.

 

[Yurnero]

Nice

 

[BoredTears]

Iruna used, a child is present.
Lefi used seduce!
....but it failed.

 

[NeetGod]

as expected, seeing lefi talking like thee, thou or thy is more suitable, as if she was talking normally.

 

[MomoKazumi]

Yuri! Yuri! Yuri!

 

[Danthefan]

Wonderful translation! Thanks you guys!

 

[Sidhe]

If you're gonna do that shitty fake-English then it's good you're stopping

 

[zetsuravez]

so i read the LH trans version and they dont have the olde english and i like it for it was easy to understand... this one, although this olde english is better than the last chapter's LH trans version i prefer the no olde english...

 

[krispy]

this gonna turn into a snipe....they fixed the last chp bt now they jus uploading new chapters

 

[SenjiQ]

Leila best girl

 

[Koneko_Nyaa]

Thank you.
This version is still better. (even though LH stopped screwing theirs up so badly now.)

 

[NazrinMaus]

Yeah, he hates sinners so much that he was willing to nuke a city filled with innocents because a few bad people kidnapped his adopted daughter. This author is up his own ass pretty badly lol

 

[Seink]

Today is the day the sheep will eat the wolf XD

 

[Wolvenworks]

@ShimizuA
this makes more sense than the LHT version, but mistakes spotted:
-you guys typo'd "prairie" with "pririe" on pg5 and that triggers this former proofreader
-empty bubble on pg15 that should have text in it.
-page 18, "ttstrength"

 

[Harry_Dong]

I noticed that although this has slightly lower resolution, this version has a lot less steam...making it even "steamier", if you know what I mean.

 

[SotiCoto]

Hmmm... a boob-loli sheep. Curious. Still a loli though. Too babyfaced not to be.

So... does the vampire loli or the dragon loli count as first waifu? Is it based on first encountered or first bonded to?

 

[zerio]

Why would they remove the honorific stuff, yet use "Japanese ryoukan"?