Pashiri na Boku to Koisuru Banchou-san - Vol. 4 Ch. 44

EEEEY! IT'S FINALLY OUT THERE! I'm still not a big fan of Goat-girl, but the fact that she dragged it all out into the open for our couple makes her completely unjustified presence worth it.

I predict that Toramaru is gonna realize how idiotically vague she's been up until now and feel painfully embarassed, so Unoki's gonna have to get bolder to re-establish their relationship from his end.

"It's convenient having one around, you know? A crazy bitch?"
Yeah. That's what we keep Matsuri around for. At least she's funny.
 
Its finally out.

The other girl though is all over the place.
 
i get her use in the story, but in the real world had someone 'kidnapped' the person i love like that, id have put her face through a glass window already.
 
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i love the whole comment section for the past few chapters. The whole: cant understand this girl=bad character. Cmon guys there are an infinite amount of different types of people that could be born and you just happen to read about one that you cant understand. I personally like goat girl as a character. She's fun to watch. Not fun for the cast but we aren't the cast, we are spectators. Now some of you will hate it and that fine. I for one love her and want to see more of her.

Plot-wise, this isnt a plot heavy story in the first place. Its more like a slice of life romance. This isnt suppose to be filled with twists, turns, and "oh meh gawd i didnt see that coming" moments. Reminds me of the Horimiya haters that hate no plot development and emphasis on side characters.
 
So, I can kinda see what the author was going for here, basically making the girl be ultra sadistic to the point that she expressly takes personal joy out of seeing the person she cares about suffer, while conversely also wanting the person she cares about to be happy which created a bit of a conflict for her, from that perspective I appreciate that she didn't just have a change of heart now that she sees he's found someone who doesn't need him to suffer for their relationship to work, as if she gave up now it'd just raise the question of why she didn't at least tone down her sadistic impulses enough to not cause him trauma, as well it'd help explain why she focused on bullying him to such an extent in the past and would follow him to bring her back into the story. I however take personal issue with the execution of her character, setting aside how we didn't get a great reason for why the group of delinquents who regularly beat people up didn't just kick the shit out of her when she has no real fighting ability and was actively antagonizing them, I feel this didn't really explore the guy's trauma well.

See, I'm not saying he needed to be tormented for it forever or anything, but it was clearly set up as a very deep-seated issue that was one of the major barriers to him realizing that he wasn't being bullied by his now crush, as he had been basically conditioned to think that people want to bully him, he did try to stand up to his bully and overcome his fears due to his growing affection and wanting to protect someone who he cared about but that and finding out, "Oh but I actually love you so it's funny!" (note, while we're going to see her continue to bully him without serious repercussions, this will be done for the sake of humor taking advantage of how it's a comedy, her bullying is very clearly portrayed as wrong) that is looking to be the 'resolution to his trauma for the most part, which I feel isn't quite enough. The sort of trauma that he was showing earlier on in the series seemed to be on a higher level than simple fear or apprehension, which is what this arc has basically boiled it down to... Might just be me, but I was hoping for something more akin to there are various times that he's being bullied that his trauma clearly causes him to act in ways that he doesn't want to (goes along with what she says, paralyzed by fear to stop something, etc.) with him having to clearly fight against a moment and overcome it later on because she crossed a line, here we saw him recoil in fear to her a few times but he basically 'stood up' to her right from the start with the deal and that's the end of his arc, now we're just brushing away the fallout from the past under the rug by humanizing the abuser, taking attention away from the victim...

TL;DR- While I get what they were going for with the girl, I think that this arc was kinda rushed and took too much focus away from the guy dealing with his trauma, to an extent that trauma comes off as a lot weaker in this arc than it had previously.
 
Can’t believe how a character and the story got changed so dramatically in only two short chapters. In a good way, even!
 
Can't wait til she ties up and bangs Unoki on Toramaru and his wedding night just as Banchou walks into the bedroom. That's the type of sadist I think Youdou is. Oh crap, wrong type of manga.
 

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