Shiawase Kanako no Koroshiya Seikatsu - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

Wow, this is such an improvement it doesn't even feel like the same person translated/typeset it. Good job with the frog pun in particular. The only problem I have is this line: "should I OF helped?"
 
@orochijes Nah, they got it right, it's should I HAVE helped. https://www.lawlessenglish.com/english-mistakes/should-have-vs-should-of/

Nvm I looked at the previous page my bad, you're right 😅
 
You did fine, appreciate it :)
The only problem I have with this is the the grammar error "Should I OF help?". Instead it should be "Should I HAVE helped?"
 
This was a big improvement. You can edit chapters so you don't have to reupload them, btw.
 
Thanks a lot for the chapter.
Did you pick up the series?
If so, I'm looking forward to your translation of the following chapters.
If not, then hopefully you'll reconsider.
 
Thank you for picking this up. The previous attempt was fine, but this was a huge improvement as well!
 
@dcxz1991 because she's so fucking good she was behind him all that time and he didn't notice it hence the stupid bastard aka probably talking about his boss cause he never told him the nooby is actually really good, then he got scared cause she pointed the gun at him lmao
 
This is a very real improvement over your previous pass at this. Great job on improving so quickly!
 

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