Shinja Zero no Megami-sama to Hajimeru Isekai Kouryaku - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Makoto Takatsuki Encounters the Goddess

I like the MC it's a real nice change to see one that understands everything is a negotiation and yes you can say no to even the God's. The story telling, oi, it's just flat and dull. Maybe it was the chat wit the npcs in ch 1
 
MC: "Let's be honest, you still gonna read it anyways."

Me: *sniff*...yes
 
laughs in having read the original WN

Man, y'all are in for some huge surprises. Assuming that this adaptation isn't absolute BS.
 
Unfortunately, the adaptation is already losing major points with me.

Kek. The shots fired.

Honestly, Makoto here is fairly interesting as a protagonist, but I have no idea if they'll be able to show it. Whether he's just odd or it's his RPG Player skill, he looks at life from a bizarre, robotic angle, and it might be hard to convey this without POV monologues.
 
After Warlock of the Magus World I can't trust in the gods, they are just too fishy

This guy accepted her TOO easy. Come on man, she is reading your mind and obviously hiding something important from you, how can you just say Yes and that's it?
Can some WB reader tell me if this scene is better in the novel?
 

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