Story of the White Mage Who Can Read the Swordman's Heart

[Loliroze]

@ShunZephyr thank you for saving me with the insulin, but now i... need b... blood... my nose... can't stop bleeding... too much... imaginat-

 

[glub]

Gives me warm and fluffy feelings

 

[Reignlox]

GODDAMN IT I WANT MORE!!!

 

[ShunZephyr]

@Loliroze alright, here I go! *approaches with flamethrower*

(Burning the inside of your nose with surgery is a permanent way to stop nose bleeds)

 

[astrid-202]

Swordman~San,

you sir, are a gentlemen
<hats off to you my good man for not taking advantage of the situation>

a relationship is build on trust and taking a step at a time is very wise indeed

winning a lady`s heart does take time and effort , but i can confidently say that both Swordman~San and White mage~San are a match made in heaven

may they have a future together.......... soon

@ShunZephyr

are you hearing what i am hearing at the moment
just close your eyes and you can hear wedding bells for the both of them and this song playing in the background "Shane Filan - Beautiful In White"

<i`m crying not because i`m sad, but White mage~San really does look Beautiful In White>

 

[havelmom]

the pixv order is different

 

[Tsudow]

For those who didn't the check the announcement I made on ch.6,

We've caught up to the latest chapter, which is this one and this was uploaded 2 months ago.

Don't know if saiso has stopped this series or not but looks like that's the case.

 

[zerio]

How exactly does his thought come out?

 

[up234]

through his mouth

 

[dysperwithaperiod]

ok but do i rlly need this.

 

[Luke_chase]

Who tf thinks she looks scary

 

[GryphusOne]

My heartboner is fully erect. That is all.

 

[silverlightning]

The title really makes me think she's got telepathy or something, but instead the swordsman is just an idiot. Bit of a let down.

 

[Powered]

well, this is pretty good.

 

[trenslime]

I like them

 

[Clad95150]

@silverlightning I think it's more like he got cursed ? You can't be such an idiot to not notice when you talk.

 

[LegionGuy49]

Not for fleshed out stories or complicated plots, just for fun fluff to make you feel happy.

Also to get more development in 5 chapters than most romances do in 150...

 

[KuroiRyuuga]

Ummm, what part of White Mage was supposed to be scary? She was painfully shy for half of the first chapter, then an easily embarrassed beauty ever after

 

[astrid-202]

@KuroiRyuuga

That emerged from Low Self Esteem

allow me to explain

If you read the first page, from Chapter One, you will see that the expression that is reflected from White Mage~san face

with her eyebrows turning downwards as soon as she removes her hood, people will arrive at the conclusion that she is scary although she is.................. as you stated in your own comment, and i quote " She was painfully shy for half of the first chapter"

this happen because, if you read further, she has been deemed by people who, she has met before the story started, to be scary because of her face

And they also mock her, by saying that she appeared more as a mage that uses Black Magic

So imagine, after being mocked and rejected continuously when she wishes to join a party,
Low Self Esteem will play it`s part

Thankfully, all of that is in the past, where she is now changing, for the better, i am glad for her

hope this helps

 

[Pokari]

On the one hand, it's decently stupidly cute in a brain-dead sort of way. On the other hand, the initial basis of their relationship is that she has rock-bottom self-esteem and finds his ogling pleasing simply because... he likes her at all in any way? A bit unfortunate, that.

"Awkward boys, the girl of your dreams is a girl with low self-esteem!" (who over-appreciates every morsel of appreciation you give her, even if somewhat inappropriate!) is not really the implicit messaging I want in my manga. XD

On the other other hand, it gets over that stage of bad relationship messaging pretty quickly and mostly just turns into "Stupid Happy Dumb Couple Being Silly", which is a lot more palatable. Though the blatant male wish-fulfillment aspect, alas, seems to rear its ugly head periodically regardless. _{To some extent that's obviously just the sort of series this is; it's a borderline semi-ecchi semi-fluffy shounen romance, at least in spirit, and all that that implies.}