If you're implying that a lack of verb tense agreement is good English, then sure, it's just as good; you can literally use Google Docs to catch these kinds of errors. I mean, sure, you can still understand it but when literally every dialogue sounds like English between a bunch of people for whom English is their third language, it's pretty easy to break any semblance of immersion in reading.
Strictly speaking, it's not sniping if you do all the previous chapters. Just like when my group was doing Toradora at the same time as SCX. All it provided people with was two versions of the same manga to choose from. (And before anyone asks, our translations of the first 11 chapters were never uploaded to mangadex.)
the implication is the syndicate is going to get rid of soujirou (and lily) if he doesn't separate himself from lily. azuki came to deliver that message in the form of an assessment report released by the higher-ups at the syndicate, but after seeing how cute lily is, she's changed her mind and offers her services (she specialises in intelligence/info gathering). she makes sure to point out it's for lily's sake and not for soujirou's (pg.2 is all azuki speaking, except for the 'azuki' and 'no need' bubbles)
her outburst on pg.3 is threatening soujirou with his specialty (aka "imma kill you") after he insults her skills by saying he doesn't need her help
@hrein I'm the proofer, I will fight you on grammar. point out the lack of verb tense agreement.
edit this is what I get for not reading quotes. my apologies, carry on (*/ω\*)
This mangaka really loves drawing crying girls, I swear. Shinoda-san, the one about the evil dragon, Confessing to My Childhood Friend, the Succubus series (the guy cries a lot there). Lots of happy tears, but whenever I see one of this Yaki Tomato's characters crying, I know exactly who drew it.