Viper in the Vale - Promotional Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[Mellize]

Today's my birthday, so I decided to post this. Enjoy!

 

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art is so bad wtf? hahahaa

 

[Yumicho]

Ok that was quite a hot mess, sorry to say so.
The art is all over the place, in some frames it actually wasn't too bad but the body proportions of the characters are waaaay off in most frames.
Your characters have enormous heads in proportion to their bodies, their shoulders are super stiff in all frames and most hair and eye color choices are just too exaggerated. The hair color of the MC isn't bad though

 

[tonie]

@Mellize heads are a tad too big making them look like some puppet dolls which looks weird

 

[AnimefangirlX]

I thought the wonky art was deliberate to hype up the dissonance. I would actually read this web novel, but only when it's complete. Any links available? It takes a lot of courage to post your own series online, so good luck to you!

 

[SugarArirang]

Ngl you had me in the first half asskdhals
I was shook at the sudden imagery near the end
The expressions scared me hahaha

@AnimefangirlX here's a link. It's still ongoing tho
https://m.webnovel.com/amp/book/16544151906440205

 

[AnimefangirlX]

Thanks a lot!

 

[N2O]

The art is... interesting.

 

[Miliam]

The art was unexpected and almost creep me out the mc but the story is interesting. This one shot made me wanted to read the novel

 

[canaria88]

okay, story DOES look amazing.
i want more

 

[SundayHaze]

Why is the art uhh...

 

[Akera93]

Honestly, both the art and the story are unattractive. This doesn't make me excited to pick up the novel at all

 

[kaf]

@SundayHaze mangadex allows people to upload their own comics so most likely this is a solo artist who is new at this thing.

 

[aDaikon]

what is with the art? sry but that looks absolutely disgusting!

 

[camaku]

Interesting, I look forward to seeing the author develop the art style over time!