Well, I enjoyed this one. Every chapter. Exactly the thing I like.
And I don't understand, why they diss the art. As for me, it's wonderful, and I like it a lot. Maybe because they couldn't discern the characters...poor things.
Thanks for the translation.
What happened to the art was that it was rushed. I'm not sure where the mangaka originally imagined taking this story, but it was redirected after very few chapters, and then wrapped-up. The mangaka probably wasn't motivated to invest in the art of the final chapter.
Oh, it was kind of expected if will be a short story after the second chapter resolve the issue of the debt and the bond between this two grown up more legitimely.